Thanks for the feedback copywriting review on the flier

Thanks for the feedback on the flier

April 2, 2010 / Peter Butler / No Comments

Subject: Revised flier

G’day Peter

Thanks for the feedback on the flier

Now it:
• Uses simpler language that audience will understand
• Connects with their frustrations
• Paints a picture of the ideal world for audience
• Is easier to understand what the hell is on offer!
• Has a story about me
• Makes the bonuses clearer
• Has a PS to create more interest

So thanks again – feel free to use this in a testimonial (the Master & his Apprentice?) I’ll keep you posted on results.

Cheers

Andrew of Andrew Huffer & Associates

M: 0429 470 285

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Peter Butler

A passionate person known to be a serious “hobbiest” with a must for drinking only G.O.D Coffee (Ground On Demand). Love “Making Websites Work”, hence “Smarter Websites” by converting dead dormant websites into profitable websites… one at a time if necessary!

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