Subject: Revised flier G’day Peter Thanks for the feedback on the flier Now it: • Uses simpler language that audience will understand • Connects with their frustrations • Paints a picture of the ideal world for audience • Is easier to understand what the hell is on offer! • Has a story about me • […]
Read MoreWhen the yellow pages rep came to see me he started to tell me what I needed. I then told him what I wanted and showed him my ad. He then tried to change most of the ad. I suggested that he change nothing and that I was confident that what I had would work. […]
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